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Illustration for Contest by rurounijordi Illustration for Contest by rurounijordi
Illustration I'm still working on for a contest... critique has never been more wanted! please help me pointing out anything! I'm really truly asking you!! critique plzzzz!!! (there's also a comic contest... I'm also working on that... hopefully I will update you with that later)
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Ilustracion en la que estoy trabajando para un concurso... las criticas ahora mas que nunca son bienvenidas! por favor ayudenme a señalar cualquier cosa que no cuadre, se los pido de verdad!!! critiquen porfaaaaa!!! (tambien hay un concurso de historietas... estoy en trabajando en la mia... ojala pronto pueda subir algo de eso tmb)

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paulisan Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa de lo mejor ¡¡¡ jordi como siempre como dicen en mi pais ¡¡¡¡
QUE CHIMBA ¡¡¡¡¡¡ A lo que mas me gusta es el entitado perfecto ¡
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rurounijordi Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2008
muchas gracias! ^_^ aunque a decir verdad, me parecio que Monyo tiene razon XD no me termina de gustar tanto a mi el entintado... todavia tengo mucho que mejorar... y muchas cosas que definir en mi estilo de dibujo... en fin... como has estado... quisiera poder saber mas de usted! que cuenta? yo hace un buen rato que no tengo internet en mi computadora...
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Monyo Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2008
veo dos problemas...
1º la sombra, tiene una sombra entre fuerte y debil.
si queres usar sombra fuerte, necesitas hacerla más fuerte aún.
2º Es la línea de la tinta, como la sombra necesitas manejar diferentes grosores, esta muy debil y hace que todo el dibujo se te aplane.
Mira sadamoto que tiene un gran manejo de la línea manga en tinta. O un Otomo, aunque otomo es más de pincel...
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drakesangel Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
this is just perfect you don't need critique :#1:
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rurounijordi Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
you really think so? :innocent: thank you so much =)
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drakesangel Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
of course, you're very talented as I always sais :nod:
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Aerawen-Vanhouten Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2008
I like it overall, I think that the way the character is holding the sword looks a little unnatural an there is not enough contrast between the sky and the wing. I think the wing structure needs to be more defined cause before I read the comments, i thought it was a mountain too. ^^; Other than that I think it looks great! :thumbsup:
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rurounijordi Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2008
ok-hey dok-hey! (yeah I just randomly felt like messing with pronunciation) anyway, thanks for your time... you managed to spot like the only... hmmm... spot... that wasn't criticized already (the hand holding the sword) hahaha ^^; so now I think my critique collection for this one is complete... I'll try to find time to work on it all over =D
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Aerawen-Vanhouten Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2008
Eh, dont take it too hard. Everyone's gonna see something different no matter what you do. It really is a Awesome pic! :nod:
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rurounijordi Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2008
ooh no, you got the wrong impression of my comment... I really was waiting for loooots and loooots of critique to start over... (I noted a lot of people about it after all)
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